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Desolation Row

Stories from Blackout Inn.

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erau urme de tălpi pe gresie de unt pe covor
de palme pe ziduri și urme de vânt în păr mai ales
pe unde treceam însemnați de fericire
consumând drame euforii țigări fructe de mare
nopți suflate cu argint poate vieți
veneam dinspre nord era prin iunie eram trei
doi gemeni în oglindă un outsider
cu rucsaci inegali burdușiți cu vise diferit colorate
al meu roșu al tău negru al lui kaki
aveam un stilou cu peniță subțire guașe diapozitive
nimic nu avea să scape neconsemnat
în manierismul nostru dezinvolt de oameni cu eșarfe
brățări tatuaje și haine de bambus
niciodată plictisiți niciodată triști poate doar tremurând
uneori sub atingerea timpului spălat cu apă rece
pe mâini
camera părea o carte de oaspeți cu o singură pagină
un portal adăpostind de ploaie exploratorii naivi
și vara întinsă înainte pe pat în pervaz pe tavan
într-un vis colectiv / ispititoare ca o curtezană dansând
de undeva / pe muzicuța lui Dylan
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@dana-banuDBDana Banu
recunosc, îmi sunt oarecum îndepărtătoare englezismele prea des uzitate de autorii site-ului prin titluri și subtitluri, maioneza din primul vers mă lasă în tăcere dar...

te folosești de accesorii cu stil, ai aici o anume prospețime intactă, epitetele deși forțate pe alocuri(ex: \"vis colectiv\") dau irizări demne de privit cu atenție,

o poezie cu respirație largă, bine desenată, părerea mea,

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@adela-settiASAdela Setti
mă bucur că ai gustat această poveste. am dat maioneza la schimb, nici mie nu îmi plăcea :) Blackout Inn. este un hotel imaginar, undeva prin America anilor \'60, iar Diamond Bay e titlul unei piese de Bob Dylan pe care cred că o știi... seria aceasta încearcă [nu știu cu cât succes] o continuare mai specifică a călătoriilor din Visions of the Unglobetrotters... na, acum chiar că am dat-o pe englezisme :(
miza este călătoria interioară, de fapt. o călătorie pe parcursul căreia nu se întâmplă nimic propriu-zis, doar stări de spirit.
Adela, cu drag
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@adela-settiASAdela Setti
Desolation Row

They\'re selling postcards of the hanging
They\'re painting the passports brown
The beauty parlor is filled with sailors
The circus is in town
Here comes the blind commissioner
They\'ve got him in a trance
One hand is tied to the tight-rope walker
The other is in his pants
And the riot squad they\'re restless
They need somewhere to go
As Lady and I look out tonight
From Desolation Row

Cinderella, she seems so easy
\"It takes one to know one,\" she smiles
And puts her hands in her back pockets
Bette Davis style
And in comes Romeo, he\'s moaning
\"You Belong to Me I Believe\"
And someone says,\" You\'re in the wrong place, my friend
You better leave\"
And the only sound that\'s left
After the ambulances go
Is Cinderella sweeping up
On Desolation Row

Now the moon is almost hidden
The stars are beginning to hide
The fortunetelling lady
Has even taken all her things inside
All except for Cain and Abel
And the hunchback of Notre Dame
Everybody is making love
Or else expecting rain
And the Good Samaritan, he\'s dressing
He\'s getting ready for the show
He\'s going to the carnival tonight
On Desolation Row

Now Ophelia, she\'s \'neath the window
For her I feel so afraid
On her twenty-second birthday
She already is an old maid

To her, death is quite romantic
She wears an iron vest
Her profession\'s her religion
Her sin is her lifelessness
And though her eyes are fixed upon
Noah\'s great rainbow
She spends her time peeking
Into Desolation Row

Einstein, disguised as Robin Hood
With his memories in a trunk
Passed this way an hour ago
With his friend, a jealous monk
He looked so immaculately frightful
As he bummed a cigarette
Then he went off sniffing drainpipes
And reciting the alphabet
Now you would not think to look at him
But he was famous long ago
For playing the electric violin
On Desolation Row

Dr. Filth, he keeps his world
Inside of a leather cup
But all his sexless patients
They\'re trying to blow it up
Now his nurse, some local loser
She\'s in charge of the cyanide hole
And she also keeps the cards that read
\"Have Mercy on His Soul\"
They all play on penny whistles
You can hear them blow
If you lean your head out far enough
From Desolation Row

Across the street they\'ve nailed the curtains
They\'re getting ready for the feast
The Phantom of the Opera
A perfect image of a priest
They\'re spoonfeeding Casanova
To get him to feel more assured
Then they\'ll kill him with self-confidence
After poisoning him with words

And the Phantom\'s shouting to skinny girls
\"Get Outa Here If You Don\'t Know
Casanova is just being punished for going
To Desolation Row\"

Now at midnight all the agents
And the superhuman crew
Come out and round up everyone
That knows more than they do
Then they bring them to the factory
Where the heart-attack machine
Is strapped across their shoulders
And then the kerosene
Is brought down from the castles
By insurance men who go
Check to see that nobody is escaping
To Desolation Row

Praise be to Nero\'s Neptune
The Titanic sails at dawn
And everybody\'s shouting
\"Which Side Are You On?\"
And Ezra Pound and T. S. Eliot
Fighting in the captain\'s tower
While calypso singers laugh at them
And fishermen hold flowers
Between the windows of the sea
Where lovely mermaids flow
And nobody has to think too much
About Desolation Row

Yes, I received your letter yesterday
(About the time the door knob broke)
When you asked how I was doing
Was that some kind of joke?
All these people that you mention
Yes, I know them, they\'re quite lame
I had to rearrange their faces
And give them all another name
Right now I can\'t read too good
Don\'t send me no more letters no
Not unless you mail them
From Desolation Row

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wIBoHaaSz2g
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