Poezie
Dust
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Mediu
I couldn\'t stare into the sun
Or smell the blazing heat of dust
Eternity was here, and gone
For Her\'s my unforgiving lust
I could not lie, nor say a word
For thoughts of crimson all were gone
And stars had died beneath the light
Of that which once had been our sun
A grain of sand in which lies trapped
The desert lost, the dust of life
A sleeping rose, when sunset died
Or storms of love, endorsed in lie
And it has turned to smoke around
But I remained, in rotten shame
My sight still sunken in the ground
Surrounded by the burning flame
And yet my scream is only lost
I witness my despairing lust
Hope, as we know, dies last
But all else crumbled in the past
Twisted mind, and shapeless thought
As always, I have lost all hope
Remembrance where I should belong
Now once again must be alone.
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U2 - Staring at the Sun
Lake of Tears - Crimson Cosmos
Sting - Desert Rose ...
Therefore, it has been a pleasure for me to wander through your \"dust\".
Still, I think the last part of the poem can still be perfected; there is a slight rupture of the rhythm. Not to mention that mispelled \"crumbled\" :)
I\'m looking forward to reading more of your poems.
Andreea