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Ars amandi ars Diavoli
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You don\'t say forget\'s what we never do
Takin\' deep the morn\' last our nightly trace
Third degree redemption can you see it really
Out blue yourself much better
Just one more juvenile delinquent case
Said won\'t you bring your lovin\' all to me
See back mine another\'s gonna
Morning on the other end
Hold! its shades don\'t ever wanna
Play this back and forth I say
In a world of good intentions
Love is what we never do
For our gods or saints or merely
For ourselves...
Sacrifice, o Lord, that matters
Gonna need it more than once
Every drop of pure your sweat
That I love so gimme all sacrifices losin\' you
See, the rest so virgins not -
Fooled your love that fooled you too...
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ML
MLMotoc Lavinia✓
Please write \"f*d\" in full. Regards.
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BLavinia a refuzat acest text pe buna dreptate.
In primul rand noi nu folosim prescurtari de genul acesta atunci cand editam un text.
In al doilea rand daca ai recurs la prescurtare pentru a scrie in mod mai \"voalat\" un \"bad word\" atunci cu atat mai mult Lavinia a avut dreptate sa refuze textul.
Dar mai stii, poate \"f*d\" inseamna \"followed\" sau alt cuvant.
So I also can\'t be sure if this word is a bad one.
But the poem is a good, I would say. Keep trying.
Take care.
Anca V. Anghel
In primul rand noi nu folosim prescurtari de genul acesta atunci cand editam un text.
In al doilea rand daca ai recurs la prescurtare pentru a scrie in mod mai \"voalat\" un \"bad word\" atunci cu atat mai mult Lavinia a avut dreptate sa refuze textul.
Dar mai stii, poate \"f*d\" inseamna \"followed\" sau alt cuvant.
So I also can\'t be sure if this word is a bad one.
But the poem is a good, I would say. Keep trying.
Take care.
Anca V. Anghel
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AL
My oh my,
The \"F\" word was not necessarily the intended one - I chose to mystify so you could take your guess on it.
From what you were previously implyin\' I gather the \"F\" word would have never made it here? You must be jokin\'!!! It figures in all English dictionaries, for all I care - besides, I\'m not the first to use it in literature... Jesus! There must be at least 5 \"F\" word writers who got the Nobel prize...
Couldn\'t help noticing:
But the poem is a good ONE, you SHOULD say.
Later!
Axel
The \"F\" word was not necessarily the intended one - I chose to mystify so you could take your guess on it.
From what you were previously implyin\' I gather the \"F\" word would have never made it here? You must be jokin\'!!! It figures in all English dictionaries, for all I care - besides, I\'m not the first to use it in literature... Jesus! There must be at least 5 \"F\" word writers who got the Nobel prize...
Couldn\'t help noticing:
But the poem is a good ONE, you SHOULD say.
Later!
Axel
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RHmaestre, motivul pentru care deocamdata ne protejam de f-words este ca nu dorim sa acumulam tot traficul site-urilor \"de profil\".
va exista si o zona neprotejata, care va fi protejata de spiderii motoarelor de cautare, ca sa nu cauti x-rated content si sa ajungi pe poezie.ro
dar deocamdata ne abtinem
multumesc pentru intelegere.
va exista si o zona neprotejata, care va fi protejata de spiderii motoarelor de cautare, ca sa nu cauti x-rated content si sa ajungi pe poezie.ro
dar deocamdata ne abtinem
multumesc pentru intelegere.
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B* Wanted to say: the poem is a good one
Take it easy and keep writing.
There are many F\'s in this world. The 5 F\'s, the 4 F\'s etc.
Btw I bet you\'ll never guess what the 4 F\'s are:)
I don\'t \"wanna\" say anything bad to discourage you.
But here is all about literature, nothing more ore less than that.
Anca V. Anghel
Take it easy and keep writing.
There are many F\'s in this world. The 5 F\'s, the 4 F\'s etc.
Btw I bet you\'ll never guess what the 4 F\'s are:)
I don\'t \"wanna\" say anything bad to discourage you.
But here is all about literature, nothing more ore less than that.
Anca V. Anghel
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AL
Inteles motivul, multam de explicatie. (desi, sincer vorbind, pe motoarele de cautare xcontent poezie.ro ar aparea probabil pe la pagina 100 - tocmai ca nu este site de profilul respectiv si sunt enorm de multe pe profilul in cauza).
Anca, merci de incurajari. Nu-mi sarisem din pepeni, cand imi sar trebuie sa am motive serioase (si fac extrem de urat atunci). I don\'t need to take it easy, but thanx for your concern. I never said this was anything but a literary site, did I? Don\'t think I did, gotta gimme that.
C U!
Axel
Anca, merci de incurajari. Nu-mi sarisem din pepeni, cand imi sar trebuie sa am motive serioase (si fac extrem de urat atunci). I don\'t need to take it easy, but thanx for your concern. I never said this was anything but a literary site, did I? Don\'t think I did, gotta gimme that.
C U!
Axel
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