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LSLuminita Suse
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Luminita Suse is a member of the League of Canadian Poets, Haiku Canada, The Ontario Poetry Society, Tanka Canada, Tanka Society of America, and others.
Publications:
- Skylark No. 2, 2013, UK
- Ottawa Arts Review, Issue 7.1,2013, Canada
- Byline, Vol.30, No.4, Aug-Sep 2013, Canada
- World Haiku Review, 2012
- A Hint of Light, co-author Mike Montreuil, response tanka, Edition des petits nuages, 2013, Canada
- A Thousand Fireflies / Mille Lucioles, Edition des petits nuages, 2012, Canada
- Avid Walls, phafours press, 2012, Canada
- Kado Calea Poeziei, Vol. 1:1, 2012, Romania
- Bywords Quarterly Journal, 2006-2013, Canada
- The New Stalgica Hymnal, 2009, Canada
- Ditch Poetry, 2008, Canada
- The Broken City, No. 6, 2010, Canada
- Air Out In Air, 21 Poets for the Guatemala Stove Project, phafours press, 2011, Canada
- Moonbathing, No. 2-6, 2010-2012, USA
- Magnapoets, No. 7-9, 2012, Canada
- Magnapoets “Butterfly Away” anthology, 2011, Canada
- Magnapoets “Many Windows” anthology, 2011, Canada
- Ribbons – Tanka Café, Vol.6/No.4,Vol.7/No.1-3,Vol. 8/No.1-2, 2010-2012, USA
- Gusts, 2010-2013, Canada
- Red Lights, 2011-2013, USA
- A Hundred Gourds, 2011-2013, USA
- Notes from the Gean, 3:2, 3:3, 3:4, 3:5, 4:1, 2011-2012, USA
- Kokako #18, 2013, New Zealand
- Prune Juice #9, 2012, USA
- Atlas Poetica, No. 7, 9-11/2010-2012, USA
- Take Five: Best Contemporary Tanka 2010, USA
- Take Five: Best Contemporary Tanka 2011, USA
- American Tanka, 2011, USA
- The Temple Bell Stops, anthology, 2012, USA
- Spirit Eyes and Fireflies, anthology of The Ontario Poetry Society, 2011, Canada
- Arborealis, anthology of The Ontario Poetry Society, 2010, Canada
- Emerging Stars, anthology of The Ontario Poetry Society, 2010, Canada
- Anthology One, anthology of Ascent Aspirations Magazine, BC, 2006, Canada
- Agua Terra, anthology of Ascent Aspirations Magazine, BC, 2007, Canada
- Borderlines, anthology of Ascent Aspirations Magazine, BC, 2008, Canada
- New World Century, anthology of Ascent Aspirations Magazine, 2010, Canada
- As One Cradles Pain, anthology of Ascent Aspirations Magazine, 2012, Canada
- Astropoetica, www.astropoetica.com, 2004, USA
- Enchanted Crossroads anthology of The Ontario Poetry Society, 2007, Canada
- Butterfly Thunder anthology of The Ontario Poetry Society, 2008, Canada
- Frost & Foliage, anthology of The Ontario Poetry Society, 2009, Canada
- Verse Afire, newsletters of The Ontario Poetry Society, since 2006, Canada
- Sage of Consciousness 2:3 e-zine, 2006, USA
- The Saving Banister anthology of the Canadian Authors Association, 2006-2008, Canada
Awards:
- 3rd place in CAA-NCR National Capital Writing Contest, 2013, Canada
- first prize in The Open Heart Poetry Competition 2012, The Ontario Poetry Society
- honourable mention in the The 7th International Tanka Festival Competition, 2012,organised by Japan Tanka Poets’ Society
- honourable mention in CAA-NCR National Capital Writing Contest, 2012, Canada
- shortlisted for 2010 Descant/Winston Collins Prize for Best Canadian Poem
- third place and two honourable mentions in Emerging from Shadows Contest 2011, The Ontario Poetry Society
honourable mention in Emerging from Shadows Contest , 2010, The Ontario Poetry Society
- six honourable mentions in The Open Heart Poetry Competition 2009-2012, The Ontario Poetry Society
- third place and honourable mention by Chocolate River Poetry Association in the Flat Signed Poetry Competition 2007
Vezi profilul
impresioneaza descrierea ingerului din a patra strofa, insa si strofa a treia imi place, pentru jocul subtil dinspre abstractiunile logicii spre real. de fapt ideile stiintelor exacte fac la tine casa buna cu poezia, iar aici inca din titlu se face trimiterea.
se observa si simetria dintre \"nu cred ca ... dar daca\", initial despre ingeri, apoi strofa a treia si reluarea mai ampla a discursului in a patra si a cincea, aplicata perceptiei tatalui. apoi ultima strofa rimeaza cu secunda la nivel al idei vehiculate. o simetrie a formei de expunere, insa nu mai este ceva nou la tine.
si totusi poeziei ii lipseste ceva. poate temele abordate, desi perspectiva la tine este matematicizata aproape, insa in ciuda personalizarii nu reusesc sa impuna ceva realmente nou, parca prea cuminti (desi mesajul nu se duce spre aceasta zona).
o poezie frumoasa, insa, a unor sensuri care nu se lasa descifrate la prima citire.