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summer time
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Let\'s get lost between two gestures. Let\'s get lost because the summer is so far away now and the tender sea will not caress me anymore. So let\'s get lost between two blue sheets
and pretend we\'re dancing with the dolphins.
I\'m gonna get lost with or without you, love, between my memories of the warm green water, between two sunsets and a sunrise. But if you want to come, I\'ll wait until you learn to swim, \'cause I\'m not gonna lose you to the sea...
\"Summer time and the living is easy, fish are jumping and the cotton is high... \"
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- Anne Marie Oprea
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Two tiny objections to the spelling:
- \"the tender see\" - sea, right?
- \"gonna loose you\" - I think you meant \"lose\".
Please correct me if my latter intervention (loose - lose) is not justified here. The meanings of \"loose\" that I am aware of don\'t fit in the context, or so it seems to me.
Andreea